Through th tunnel

Characters:

Jerry (11 year old english boy)
Jerry's mom
the boy's
Setting:
Time: Summer(holiday)
Place:  Story takes place At the big white sandy beach and a small rokcy bay next to it.
Plot
Start:
On the fist morning of the holiday Jerry the only child and his mom a widow go to the beach and he gets an idea to leave his mom to go check out the small bay next to the big beach.He walks down the rocks at the bay.He ran straight into the water and began swimming.He was a good swimmer,he swam till the real sea and could see his mother on the big beach.On the edge of a small cape boys were stripping off their clothes and came down the rocks naked.Jerry swam towards themone of the boys waved to him and they shouted greetings to him.together with the boys they started diving into the water...
Middle:
The boys dived into the water and Jerry start counting to check how long they could stay under water, he counted till hundred but still the boys  hadnt come up yet,this worried him so he started counting fast to hurry them up.soon the water was filled with the boys coming up.Later the boys left to another promontory.He cried openly because there was no one to see him cry.Jerry then swam into the water up to where he could see his mother then he swam ashore and went back to the villa to waite for his mother,as she came back from the beach he panted at her asking her to buy him swimming goggles.soon after they went to the shop to buy the goggles.He grabbed them from his mother and ran straight for the steep beach,he put them and dived into the water and the impact was so great that the goggles rubber enclosed vacuum came loose.he swam back to the rock to fix them.after he dived back in the water,he could see everything under water very cearly and could see the bottm.he started lookingt for the hole where the big boys had swum through,he couldnt find but then later when he was hanging on the black wall he shot his feet out forward and found no obstacle-he had found the hole.as he entered the hole his shoulders got jammed but swung them side to side and went in till his waiste but something smooth touched and he thought of octapus' so he pushed himself backwards.later that night he dreamt of underwater caves,his nose bled heavily that night...
 End:
 Jerry kept going back to dive,trained his lungs,another day and he saw the big boys again,while diving he banged his head...

my experience when i created this blog

My experience was good, interesting but time wasting...